rpsousa's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Pit Of Destiny]

suprinsigly entertaining

the animations itself its not amazing, but that will come with time, the ideia behind it its fun, and i found myself really enjoying it. So wel done on the creativity !!!

JEYcompris responds:

Thanks a lot rpsousa, that helpful first comment goes directly forward my heart (No sarcasm).
I'm primary an illustrator and that was a side job. But surely with time it'll get better !

[Generic Protagonist #2]

stupidly funny

I was thinking about how i felt about this movie. Ill be honest, the cartoons werent amazing, but thats the characters you made, the sound sync was pretty good, and the animation itself was good had well, i didnt see any lag or weird movements in the animation.

The humour, its really not my kind of humour, but theres people that really appreciatte this kind of "stupid" sense of humour, so its really up to what you like to create. All together, iwell done on your Random humourous flash!!

drodZILiA responds:

Thanks!

[The PissGuard 3000]

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Its was funny, you didnt animate much, only everyone faces, no shadows, keep it simple. The story was ok so

4/5 why not
ps: next time draw the piss stains, and explain how the device works!

FDCrew responds:

Thats a good point I never really thought of that, would of explained it alot beter. Thanks for a the generous score.

[FBF Stick Fight Extended]

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how the hell do this animation hv 3.07 in the score, its completely absurd, no scenario, the movements simply werent there, the music was beats all around it, wich means u simply just put it there and didnt even looked for one that fitted.

My advices, its really important to know how to do a menu and buttons and crap, but be more concerned with the animation than that,

second if ull do stickmans in the future, practise their movements, dont put tem flying around like their wood and say they are moving, u will only manage to do the movements right if u practise, if u keep sending craps like these and say they are moving and kicking ull never improve urself, third and last, use a different tipe of stickmans, bigger and with his legs and arms longer.

i know its hard to do it, im starting to improve myself, but my animations were way better than this and had almost the same score.

dont take this personally, im just trying to pass out wht i already know (wich is still little):P

Aqlex responds:

Haha, yeah, I didn't really know what I was doing at the time (not that I really do now, either). Fighting wasn't something I had worked with a lot, and neither was music. I've never been too great with movement, though again, I think I've been improving a bit.

I do, however, disagree with needing to use a different style of "stickman." I kinda feel like that's a stylistic thing, and that having them the way you describe them would make them more generic. BUT, these two do need to be more different from one another for sure.

Thanks for the review, always glad to hear what people think!

[Asylum 3]

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I hv to agree with some of the reviews i read, this is a great job, the effects were all well made, the movements of the characters where perfect, the scenario didnt hv any crazy perspective error and the music was also very well sincronized with what was happening.

Personally i dont like the tipe of stickmans you use, but has long as they dont move weird or anything its fine.

The story i tought it was a bit crappy because of somethings that happened, first how the hell did he broke out of the cell, if cells were like that, everyone would escape, second, where did he got all hose guns,third the movie is basically the same thing from the beginning to the end, a guy shooting, a stickman animation should hv a fight, we hv madness for the ones who like to kill everyone by only pressing the trigger, and last, that guy must be the luckyest guy in the world cause he just stands in front of the other guys and no one manages to hit him.

So Tecnical part was perfect very well done, but the elaboration of the plot sucks, next time ask someone to write a plot with all the detail and u take care of tranforming it into an animation, im sure it would be a fantastic job.

So 8/10 and 4/5
Congratulations

Swished responds:

Thanks man, that's cool.

He indeed was lucky, his celldoor was broken, so he tried to escape.
And you can clearly see how he gets his guns.
I focused more on the action side, instead of a story. =)

[blarina brevicauda]

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Find other things to use ur time xD

Magyar responds:

wasting people's time is fun.

[Nursing Home Madness]

Very short, but funny...

It was very short but u already know that, but the ideia of 1 old guy escaping from some kind of mental or retirement institution using " old guys tricks" ( whtever they are) its a good ideia, i hope u continue with the ideia.

Rapheus responds:

Hmm... Good idea. It is fun animating old people...

[The Complete DAD Saga]

srry but i just dont get it

I must be really doom cause i dont neither the quality nor the fun in watching this stuff, this is a really stupid animation with zero creativity and zero work.

Srry about this comment but u must admit everyone can do this, and u cant call this an animation cause its not animated.

hv u heard of the movies in the beginning were like this, u had images changing( it was called a slide show back in time when the earth was only one continent) and there was a guy plying a song on the piano.

if u saw something like that today u would probably think... wht a piece of crap...well thats wht i tought when i saw this>

once again srry for being so direct and honest but thats why the reviews are here>

Sidorio responds:

Wow. I'm shocked.

How could one person butcher the English language like that?

[I'm Still Here]

Very well done!!

Congratulations, if that was showing on tv i would surely think that that was de videoclip of that song. The images are simple but theres no need to complicate when things are already perfect. i usually dont hv patience o see movies like that but this one i enjoy it to do end. well done

LeafLock responds:

im glad you enjoyed it. ^.^

[Sean Does A Dance]

This is really bad man!

It was fonny for about half a second, but then it just got bored! In the beginning you timed the motion with the song, wich was ok, but when the song started to change your litle friend just kept changing the same way has before , not following the song, im sorry but this is really bad!

Sidorio responds:

It was fonny all the way through if you ask me.