I totally agree!!
The animation was crap obviously, in fact the wasn't any animation, but im sure that was not the point of your animations.
Everything else was good, you would be good for a debate team or something, a comedy one, because you are actually funny. I really think you should look more into the curse idea, because i really think there is something dodgy with the pokemon games, they must hypnotize us or something.
Good fun animation overall!
the animations itself its not amazing, but that will come with time, the ideia behind it its fun, and i found myself really enjoying it. So wel done on the creativity !!!
Thanks a lot rpsousa, that helpful first comment goes directly forward my heart (No sarcasm).
I'm primary an illustrator and that was a side job. But surely with time it'll get better !
I was thinking about how i felt about this movie. Ill be honest, the cartoons werent amazing, but thats the characters you made, the sound sync was pretty good, and the animation itself was good had well, i didnt see any lag or weird movements in the animation.
The humour, its really not my kind of humour, but theres people that really appreciatte this kind of "stupid" sense of humour, so its really up to what you like to create. All together, iwell done on your Random humourous flash!!
dont push it to far....
it was funny when it hit the building, but the rest was just amanzingly stupid...
Its was funny, you didnt animate much, only everyone faces, no shadows, keep it simple. The story was ok so
4/5 why not
ps: next time draw the piss stains, and explain how the device works!
Thats a good point I never really thought of that, would of explained it alot beter. Thanks for a the generous score.
I know u guys are trying to get people to know ur idols or whatever they are....but i hv to say i hate this sort of crap. ill give you a 2/5 and a 5/10 cause it works!
how the hell do this animation hv 3.07 in the score, its completely absurd, no scenario, the movements simply werent there, the music was beats all around it, wich means u simply just put it there and didnt even looked for one that fitted.
My advices, its really important to know how to do a menu and buttons and crap, but be more concerned with the animation than that,
second if ull do stickmans in the future, practise their movements, dont put tem flying around like their wood and say they are moving, u will only manage to do the movements right if u practise, if u keep sending craps like these and say they are moving and kicking ull never improve urself, third and last, use a different tipe of stickmans, bigger and with his legs and arms longer.
i know its hard to do it, im starting to improve myself, but my animations were way better than this and had almost the same score.
dont take this personally, im just trying to pass out wht i already know (wich is still little):P
Haha, yeah, I didn't really know what I was doing at the time (not that I really do now, either). Fighting wasn't something I had worked with a lot, and neither was music. I've never been too great with movement, though again, I think I've been improving a bit.
I do, however, disagree with needing to use a different style of "stickman." I kinda feel like that's a stylistic thing, and that having them the way you describe them would make them more generic. BUT, these two do need to be more different from one another for sure.
Thanks for the review, always glad to hear what people think!
I hv to agree with some of the reviews i read, this is a great job, the effects were all well made, the movements of the characters where perfect, the scenario didnt hv any crazy perspective error and the music was also very well sincronized with what was happening.
Personally i dont like the tipe of stickmans you use, but has long as they dont move weird or anything its fine.
The story i tought it was a bit crappy because of somethings that happened, first how the hell did he broke out of the cell, if cells were like that, everyone would escape, second, where did he got all hose guns,third the movie is basically the same thing from the beginning to the end, a guy shooting, a stickman animation should hv a fight, we hv madness for the ones who like to kill everyone by only pressing the trigger, and last, that guy must be the luckyest guy in the world cause he just stands in front of the other guys and no one manages to hit him.
So Tecnical part was perfect very well done, but the elaboration of the plot sucks, next time ask someone to write a plot with all the detail and u take care of tranforming it into an animation, im sure it would be a fantastic job.
So 8/10 and 4/5
Thanks man, that's cool.
He indeed was lucky, his celldoor was broken, so he tried to escape.
And you can clearly see how he gets his guns.
I focused more on the action side, instead of a story. =)
Find other things to use ur time xD
wasting people's time is fun.
A bit choppy....
Ill give u a 3/5 and a 7/10.
Ill start with the good stuff, the music was perfectly choosed and sincronized with the movie, it had a story unlike most fo the things u see here, the story was a good and simple. why complicate whts already good! And the camera movements were amzing too, there was only one or two u probably i wouldnt do it cause it was too much, but thats only me.
Now for the bad stuff ur frame rate was to low, like i said before it was choppy and not smooth has it should be, and there wasnt much of animating u used the camera most of the times witth the animation standing still, wich is intelligent but the final work would be much more espectacular if u animated more, it would be more work for u to do but maybe u would reach a four in ur score. for last i dont know if u use a drawing tablet or just the mouse but if u se the mouse i suggest u try to bought a tablet, the drawings would be better ( im planing on buying one mysef)
I just like to cangratulate u again, for this good work, and keep it up!!
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