rpsousa's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Pit Of Destiny]

suprinsigly entertaining

the animations itself its not amazing, but that will come with time, the ideia behind it its fun, and i found myself really enjoying it. So wel done on the creativity !!!

JEYcompris responds:

Thanks a lot rpsousa, that helpful first comment goes directly forward my heart (No sarcasm).
I'm primary an illustrator and that was a side job. But surely with time it'll get better !

[Generic Protagonist #2]

stupidly funny

I was thinking about how i felt about this movie. Ill be honest, the cartoons werent amazing, but thats the characters you made, the sound sync was pretty good, and the animation itself was good had well, i didnt see any lag or weird movements in the animation.

The humour, its really not my kind of humour, but theres people that really appreciatte this kind of "stupid" sense of humour, so its really up to what you like to create. All together, iwell done on your Random humourous flash!!

drodZILiA responds:

Thanks!

[The PissGuard 3000]

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Its was funny, you didnt animate much, only everyone faces, no shadows, keep it simple. The story was ok so

4/5 why not
ps: next time draw the piss stains, and explain how the device works!

FDCrew responds:

Thats a good point I never really thought of that, would of explained it alot beter. Thanks for a the generous score.

[FBF Stick Fight Extended]

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how the hell do this animation hv 3.07 in the score, its completely absurd, no scenario, the movements simply werent there, the music was beats all around it, wich means u simply just put it there and didnt even looked for one that fitted.

My advices, its really important to know how to do a menu and buttons and crap, but be more concerned with the animation than that,

second if ull do stickmans in the future, practise their movements, dont put tem flying around like their wood and say they are moving, u will only manage to do the movements right if u practise, if u keep sending craps like these and say they are moving and kicking ull never improve urself, third and last, use a different tipe of stickmans, bigger and with his legs and arms longer.

i know its hard to do it, im starting to improve myself, but my animations were way better than this and had almost the same score.

dont take this personally, im just trying to pass out wht i already know (wich is still little):P

Aqlex responds:

Haha, yeah, I didn't really know what I was doing at the time (not that I really do now, either). Fighting wasn't something I had worked with a lot, and neither was music. I've never been too great with movement, though again, I think I've been improving a bit.

I do, however, disagree with needing to use a different style of "stickman." I kinda feel like that's a stylistic thing, and that having them the way you describe them would make them more generic. BUT, these two do need to be more different from one another for sure.

Thanks for the review, always glad to hear what people think!

[Nursing Home Madness]

Very short, but funny...

It was very short but u already know that, but the ideia of 1 old guy escaping from some kind of mental or retirement institution using " old guys tricks" ( whtever they are) its a good ideia, i hope u continue with the ideia.

Rapheus responds:

Hmm... Good idea. It is fun animating old people...